Good at the concept and plot level, cringeworthy at the sentence and word level.
There is no Oxfam in Toronto, although obviously there are Winners locations everywhere. Whose miss was that?
Good at the concept and plot level, cringeworthy at the sentence and word level.
There is no Oxfam in Toronto, although obviously there are Winners locations everywhere. Whose miss was that?
Fine, but I don't have the context to get a lot of the references.
Pretty good. I always wonder if infelicities of prose are intentional ("Guilt by association is not a crime.'). And for a forensic accountant, the protagonist doesn't do much accounting - just social media scraping (first contracted out, then directly). Didn't get the Baron von Rijsstafel pun.
Re-read in preparation for the sequel. Still very good, appealing characters in peril.